good stuff man. i don't really know much about rap so i can't critique that aspect but in general, it's good to me, though the mixing could use a tiny bit of work, but really all songs mixing could use a tiny bit of work, lol.
Also, damnnnn really like the lyrics 'specially at the end. "What alotta people tellin me
I already know
There's alotta people tellin me
I ain't got the flow
There's a lotta people tellin me
I rap too *Slow*
It's a craze, it's a phase
that I'll soon outgrow-
Woah
Man, this ain't quid pro quo
I'm a lyrical artist,
I'm a sonic van gogh
I'm just paintin you a picture that you cant control
and I'm unrecognized
Like a U.F.O."
anyways. good track man. and don't let anyone tell you that you can't make it. you got this shit. continue evolving.